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Old March 27 2013, 05:16 AM   #17
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Re: Is Kirk a Well-Defined Character?

Dale Sams wrote: View Post
The events of Conscience of the King are completly seperate from Sam's death.
Sorry, I misunderstood your post. When I read:
Given:
The events of Conscience of the King
He doesn't seem too broken up over his brother's death
My mind eliminated a colon and inserted a comma, creating a single sentence: "Given the events of Conscience of the King, he doesn't seem too broken up over his brother's death." Which makes no sense.

I realize that's not what you meant. Chalk it up to my professional proofreader's eye, or a brain fart.
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