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Old March 21 2013, 08:35 AM   #179
CeJay
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Re: UT:TFV - Part II - Scorched Earths

Loving the way you're building the tension here. The Romulans are lurking and we know what they've got planned but nobody on Europa seems to have a clue, even the usually tactically minded Pava doesn't see the threat yet. Even though the call to let the Ferou know about their presence was a good move which may prove pivotal later on.

Also, good to see Pava in an unfamiliar role. He's doing alright so far.
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