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Old March 16 2013, 02:51 PM   #41
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Re: The Dominion Triumphant: A Star Trek Dystopia

I just found this thread. Good premise & good writing.

doublegoodprole wrote: View Post
I've always wanted to be a writer, but I've never really had the self-discipline to practice enough to be become close to adequate. So I really do appreciate everyone putting up with what might be a bit of, uh...strained prose. I get excited to post things, and I'm not editing myself that well.

I'll try and write updates ahead of time, and then give myself a chance to go back and edit. The ending to the Bashir/Garak exchange is terrible.
I wouldn't worry about every conversation being perfect or "Earth" shatteringly significant, you've got the character interactions down pat.

Even the movies & TV episodes have less exciting moments.

I'm glad you're exploring multiple storylines, they're all seriously interesting.
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