Re: The Dominion Triumphant: A Star Trek Dystopia
I just found this thread. Good premise & good writing.
I've always wanted to be a writer, but I've never really had the self-discipline to practice enough to be become close to adequate. So I really do appreciate everyone putting up with what might be a bit of, uh...strained prose. I get excited to post things, and I'm not editing myself that well.
I'll try and write updates ahead of time, and then give myself a chance to go back and edit. The ending to the Bashir/Garak exchange is terrible.
I wouldn't worry about every conversation being perfect or "Earth" shatteringly significant, you've got the character interactions down pat.
Even the movies & TV episodes have less exciting moments.
I'm glad you're exploring multiple storylines, they're all seriously interesting.
Rimmer, on what period of history to live in-
“Well, It’d be the 19th century for me, one of Napoleon’s marshals.
The chance to march across Europe with the greatest general of all time and kill Belgians” - (White Hole).