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Old March 14 2013, 10:39 PM   #95
CeJay
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Re: Starship Enterprise (Alternate Version) "Regeneration"

Exploring a dark, underground, tomb-like structure is creepy enough, but you're really giving this place a nice mystic feel which adds to the tension of a possible threat around every corner.

The levity between Polly and the others is a nice little addition which is exactly how people would react in such a high pressure situation.

And now it seems something ancient (and maybe evil) has been awoken. Gonna be fun.
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