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Old March 14 2013, 05:23 PM   #2
Angry Fanboy
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Welcome to the forum.

You might get a better response if you also 'publish' your story here as a post. I've had a cursory look over it and it seems reasonably well written, but Chakotay watching a naked Janeway lather herself up in the bath isn't really my thing if I'm honest so I'll pass I'm afraid.

All the best with your writing though.
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