Ziyal - good addition or better left out?
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February 26 2013, 10:07 PM
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Re: Ziyal - good addition or better left out?
I liked Ziyal. I wish she would have been used more. I would have liked to see a friendship between her and Jake, comparing what it's like to be the offspring of such prominent figures.
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