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Old February 16 2013, 07:02 PM   #3
Sir Rhosis
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Re: Notes re. The City On The Edge Of Forever....

I will add that this memo refers to a draft of the script that is not covered fully in Ellison's book. He includes in their entirety two outlines and a slightly revised edition of his First Draft. For the draft that Justman is referring to he only includes the Teaser and Act One.

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