Re: Notes re. The City On The Edge Of Forever....
I will add that this memo refers to a draft of the script that is not covered fully in Ellison's book. He includes in their entirety two outlines and a slightly revised edition of his First Draft. For the draft that Justman is referring to he only includes the Teaser and Act One.
Last edited by Sir Rhosis; February 16 2013 at 07:03 PM.
Reason: better word choice