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Old February 8 2013, 08:05 PM   #156
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Re: UT:TFV - Part II - Scorched Earths


This is an amazing addition to the story and now I'm really hanging by a thread to see what happens next with Sandhurst. I feel like Pava forced his hand, though, owing to his own paranoia about what's happening. I think for the first time, you've really captured his fear-motivated reaction to recent events.

Looking forward to more!

-- ZC
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