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Old February 5 2013, 06:56 AM   #24
Kevin W.
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

Ok, I have a question for anyone who's reading this: how do you suggest honing my narrative-writing skills? I don't have any issue writing dialogue, but as you can see by comparing my fiction to others, the non-dialogue portions are severely lacking. I just have trouble envisioning how to write it in my head.
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