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Old February 4 2013, 04:34 PM   #2
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Re: January 2013 challenge: The Question

I really, really like the world-building here. It's truly effortless. You get a lot of exposition in, but it never feels forced or unnatural. From the seminary to the robes to the ritual, it all works. And then the ghetto and the apartheid also make sense, as does the conversation at the end, and how, essentially, Yokeen learns to cope and make sense of things.

Very well done.
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