Thank you both.
I've never actually done anything for the Talarians but thought it was about time to start, as I have a few ideas for them in the future.
Plus, any time I can make things a little sinister I'll always go for it
Working on the next installment now. I think it'll be focusing on the Ocampa for a few chapters, so this was really just to show my Border Dogs doing what they do best. Now I just have to explain whay role Tanis and his colony will have in Kes' plan, her return home, and the fallout from her actions in chapter one.
Hopefully that's enough of a hook to keep people reading