Two things said that I definitely agree with:
1) Picard's exchange with Armus at the end is amazing. Patrick Stewart always shines in these kinds of scenes.
2) Tasha's pink blood tattoo. Was makeup so behind the times in 1987?
I know they wanted Tasha's death to be a surprise, but the dialogue before is just painful. It's an easy fix: show Armus in his goo, have him move still if you want to and then let them pass for a split second before killing Tasha. Cuts out that horrible "Enough!"