January 10 2013, 06:01 AM
Location: Maurice in San Francisco
Re: The STAR TREK III-Love & Appreciation Thread
From the Revised Final Draft, October 7, 1983
It's a bad moment for the agent to have announced him-
Where's the logic in offering me a
ride home, you idiot! If I wanted
a ride home, would I be trying to
charter a space flight?!
(then)How the hell do you know who I am?
Federation Security, sir.
self. A desperate Bones releases the Alien and rises
to his feet just as the Waitress arrives with his Alt-
air water on a tray. The Altair water spills on the
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The Alien, hit by the water, leaps to his feet in rage.
The Waitress is knocked into a group of people.
More spilling of drinks.
A bystander, thinking the Alien hit the Waitress, hits
A general scuffle begins.
Meanwhile, McCoy tries to race around the "Civilian's"
end of the confusion, but the agent (very big), grabs
him. Bones, in confusion and panic, suddenly turns,
wild-eyed, and attempts a Vulcan nerve pinch on his
tormentor. The nerve pinch has absolutely no effect,
and the agent stares at Bones for a long moment.
He ushers Bones out as the brouhaha continues in b.g.
CIVILIANYou're going to get a nice, long
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"The road to hell is paved with works-in-progress."