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Old January 9 2013, 09:09 PM   #7
CeJay
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Re: Dark Territory: Shadow Puppets (Revised)

I think these scenes are new as I don't remember reading them before. I like the morality play here. This mission while arguably necessary falls well outside Starfleet ethical standards. Telling that the Romulan seems to struggle with this the most.

Oh and I like the tension you're building with the freighter captain having sold out our heroes who, seemingly unbeknownst to them are already heading for a trap.

Now I'm actually excited to find out what happens next even though I'm supposed to be familiar with this story already.
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