So far not bad, like the other commenter, this my first NuBSG fanfic. I esp. liked the reaction the CO had when he found out what Admiral Cain had done. I am curious as to how you are going to get away with having Samuel Anders in the story, obviously he elects to wait for Starbuck to come back. but I would find it odd that he wouldn't inform Galactica that another battlestar was out there.