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Old January 5 2013, 09:49 AM   #21
Kevin W.
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

Explaining the language thing would give away a plot point that I don't want to reveal yet. Sorry.

As for the Remington's size and complement, that I'm not totally sure about. Since I'm revamping the design, that's something I'll have to work out later.
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