A few lines they might have added.
Kim "Ma'am, Sir, sorry, Captain... I know how to make Torpedoes."
Janeway "Really kid? You do! That's incredible. Will they be as powerful as the ones we have now?"
Kim: "Ma'am, I mean Captain, Federation Torpedoes are total pussies. It's all about humane treatment of the target, reducing collateral damage and acceptable levels of genocide, if you give me 80 pounds of antimatter and 3 days and I'll make you a full compliment of torpedoes that can rip suns in half."
(Remember Carter from Hogans Heroes? He loved making things go boom.)