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Old January 4 2013, 12:10 AM   #17
Sandoval
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

T'Girl wrote: View Post
This style is fine, by this point I think we all know what a bridge looks like. It isn't necessary describe the interior of the captain's ready room unless there's a feature that is relevant to the story.
Well said.
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