Well I'm not using any goanimate "stuff". it's all custom made. But sounds like you made your mind up already. What would be acceptable copying TAS?
I'm confused, then. It says "Goanimate" in the corner of your test, so I assumed you were using their format.
As for making up my mind, I've only got your test to go off of. And I have made up my mind on that. It looks terrible to me.
Again, though, I couldn't care less about that if you tell a good story.
Look at Star Trek: Aurora for something "acceptable."