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Old January 3 2013, 11:25 AM   #15
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

Kevin W. wrote: View Post
writing the narrative portions has always been a sticking point for me.
This style is fine, by this point I think we all know what a bridge looks like. It isn't necessary describe the interior of the captain's ready room unless there's a feature that is relevant to the story.
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