Re: Looking for critiques of my writing
Yes, writing the narrative portions has always been a sticking point for me. That is caused, in part, by the fact that way back in the day (holy hell, it's been six/seven years since I started working on this series) I was writing in script form. The transition to prose has been a relatively new development.
Ari Gold: "We're gonna get drunk with Russell Crowe and we're gonna head-butt some goddamn kangaroos."
Last edited by Kevin W.; January 2 2013 at 08:11 AM.