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Old January 2 2013, 03:54 AM   #8
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

First five page have me engaged in the story, I'm wondering whose ship that is. I'm hoping it is a race we've never encountered before.

Why are the Romulans signing formal peace treaty with the Federation? They were allies during the Dominion War. Did I miss something?

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