Re: Giving Enterprise another chance
To elaborate on my point about on the nose writing, here's a similar scene from the Stargate episode 'Serpent's Song'.
If you don't tell me where she is. I'll kill you right here.
You have neither the strength nor the will.
Apophis just told Daniel: "You won't kill me. You're too moral." But it was way more interesting than if he had said "You won't kill me. You're too moral."
I don't want to spoil anything for you so I will just say that that scene and that line of dialog in particular are worth remembering.
"Can't you hurry this up a bit? I hear they eat dinner in Hades at twelve sharp and I don't aim to be late."
Black Jack Ketchum, just before he was hanged in Clayton, New Mexico on April 26, 1901