Now, if I had been the writer, I would have had Kim bursting out in this song right in the middle of the dialogue:
Love is all around me, everywhere
Love has come to touch my soul
with someone who really cares
No one can deny us
People who once pass me by
will turn their heads on
I'm happy just to be with you, and loving you the way I do, yeah.......
"Afterglow Of Your Love"
That would have made a better impression on both Janeway and the viewers. Not to mention that it would have created some interest among Voyager fans for the good, old Small Faces too!