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Old December 22 2012, 07:54 PM   #9
CaptainGold
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Re: December 2012 Writing challenge: Gift of a Lifetime

Cobalt Frost wrote: View Post
While I like the "B" epilogue, I think epilogue "A" is more well-written and more fitting compared to the rest of the story. Nicely done!
Quite right! The more I see it, the more a rewrite screams to be done.

Is the forum usually this dead?

Please note the rewrite is completed and posted.

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