This is a posted entry in the December 2012 Writing Challenge 'I have imagined this moment for so long
' by Cobalt Frost. The next post will give an abstract of the story. The story begins in Post #3.
Two points I must acknowledge immediately:
1. I am over 10,000 words. If Cobalt is 'frosty' over this, please let me know! I will heat things up until the story is molded in its proper density.
2. I took the theme/prompt a little off the beaten track, but I believe I brought it back at the end. Again, if I am out of bounds in the opinion of the referee I won't throw a challenge flag asking for a review!
As a bonus for your entertainment:
I have written two Endings to the story, each hidden in the final posts of the story. I would greatly appreciate your opinion on which one is better for the story and the subject. I have my favorite, let me know which one you prefer and why.
Please give me your opinions and comments.