My Sci-Fi short film:
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December 10 2012, 10:44 AM
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Re: My Sci-Fi short film:
Congratulations. I'm about halfway through the screenplay and it's very good. The setting is exotic and interesting, and the dialogue flows easily and naturally.
One editorial point: Where you used the word "reside," you meant to use "recede."
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