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Old December 1 2012, 04:14 AM   #2
R. Star
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Re: Before & After/Year Of Hell relationship

Nice effort with continuity, sloppy execution in regards to the details. An extra line mentioning the past warning Kes gave would've given a nod to Before and After's events and wouldn't require changing the rest of the plot in any way.
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