Re: ''Dead Stop'' Line-by-Line
A docking tube extends to Enterprise as it stops in the docking berth.
Archer, T'Pol and Trip exit Enterprise via the airlock and walk through a clean white hallway with lights directing them oneward toward...
The diagnostic room. A holographic image of Enterprise is being displayed showing the damaged areas of the ship in red.
Trip: They've isolated every hull breach, every damaged system... I'll be damned. We scratched the hull right here a year ago. I bumped it with the inspection pod, remember?
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