^ There's nothing to be sorry about. Fanfiction is devoted to whatever floats your boat.
I like Captain Hernandez. She's got a lot of wit and sass and maturity. Some of the stuff with the virus was interesting, and it's nice that Malcolm is back on the bridge. I'm glad he kicked that Section 31 guy to the curb. That man meant well, but it seems that he was played for a fool and then he tried to cover his butt with Malcolm about it.