Very good, very reminiscent of the
Five-Minute.net story (of which I've written a couple myself).
Might just need to proof read as there were a few spelling mistakes, but otherwise I love these stories. Keep them coming. My favourite lines:
Commander Adama
We’ll go where no man has gone before to avoid the Cylons. Mr Gaeta send these jump coordinates to the fleet.
Lieutenant Gaeta
Why are you handing me the coordinates? I’m the one who worked them out.
Commander Adama
Oh yes of course. Carry on.
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