Very good, very reminiscent of the Five-Minute.net
story (of which I've written a couple myself).
Might just need to proof read as there were a few spelling mistakes, but otherwise I love these stories. Keep them coming. My favourite lines:
We’ll go where no man has gone before to avoid the Cylons. Mr Gaeta send these jump coordinates to the fleet.
Why are you handing me the coordinates? I’m the one who worked them out.
Oh yes of course. Carry on.