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Old October 27 2012, 04:29 AM   #8
TIN_MAN
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Re: Mockingbird Lane - It didn't suck!

All in all, not bad; but if it were picked up as a series I would suggest recasting Herman and and doing something with the character to make him less "ordinary". For me, Herman was the only one who didn't quite "fit".
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