Thread: Endgame Redux.
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Old September 18 2012, 09:41 PM   #2
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Re: Endgame Redux.

I kind of like it though I didn't catch all the details - some of your prose is rather confusing and you kinda need a beta reader. I would have preferred less ...florid language in regards to Janeway and her appearance, though.

I'm curious what her grand plan is here.
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