I'll be honest, I enjoyed Phase II
's version of "The Child" more than TNG's.
A few minor nitpicks: I wish the Deltan, I don't recall her name, was bald. Peter Kirk wouldn't have been old enough to be a Starfleet officer in Phase II
. He looked about 14 in "Operation: Annihilate!" so he'd be 17 at the oldest here. Xon was redundant.
Otherwise, this was a solid piece of work.