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Old August 24 2012, 02:44 PM   #35
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Re: UT:TFV - Part II - Scorched Earths

Once again, a very well written, well thought out scene. I really like the way you're allowing Pell to take the "rational" lead, turning on its ear Pava's and T'Ser's (perhaps somewhat valid) assumptions about her. I especially like the way you allowed her to articulate what they all know Sandhurst would say on the subject.

Now to see if our intrepid crew are reunited with their wayward Captain before Europa darts off to Galaxy's aid .... The tension is almost unbearable! And I LOVE it!
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