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Old August 18 2012, 11:37 AM   #26
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Re: UT:TFV - Part II - Scorched Earths

Very nice scene, extremely well written. Classic Pava, at his smoothest; and really helped solidify T'Ser's state of mind at the moment. I especially liked your very simple but impactful tie-in to her history on the Bluefin. For those of us familiar with (or addicted to) that series, it was especially evocative.
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