Congrats to the makers for getting this out there. But color me surprised that they didn't come onto the board to promote it.
Making a film of any length isn't easy, so kudos to this group for finishing.
That said, I have to say that whatever merits this show might have, it's difficult to judge them because of one thing: the sound. The audio quality is very very uneven, and it's often difficult to make out what the characters are saying. The uneven audio levels, noise, and even inconsident "room tone" in scenes is very distracting. Sound trumps picture, so my advice to the producers would be to put a lot more effort into getting good sound in future productions.