So I decided to do an alternate version of the windows above the EVA bay doors. The idea here is a kind of control booth where EVA excursions and lander module docking maneuvers are directed and monitored. The windows are at floor level inside the booth and only come up about 3.5 feet. Control panels, monitors, etc. are located above the windows and to either side, so the crew person manning the booth is able to look down onto the EVA platform and the lander module docking bay unobstructed.
The previous version was okay but I thought bowing the windows out a bit would help with the sight lines.
Just a few more details to add in this area and it's done.