I'm not really liking Pava all that much. I also find Ra-Havreii still going on about the Luna disaster a bit much. I thought we got past that by now. Melora and the telepresence is just silly. There's probably going to be more as I read on. I just hope that future Titan novels don't refer back to this one if it doesn't actually get better.
Why are we stepping backwards in character development instead of forwards?
This really bugged me too. We DID all that stuff already.
Honestly I think this is probably the worst 24th century novel published since some of the early A Time To novels.