I'm not really liking Pava all that much. I also find Ra-Havreii still going on about the Luna disaster a bit much. I thought we got past that by now. Melora and the telepresence is just silly. There's probably going to be more as I read on. I just hope that future Titan novels don't refer back to this one if it doesn't actually get better.
Why are we stepping backwards in character development instead of forwards?
I'm on page 137 of 281 and my vote is currently teetering between average and below average.
One thing I find a bit odd is the use of ... in places it seems inappropriate.