Two very good segments. The Cyclops story was very gripping. In a short amount of space you really made us care for those characters, which made the ending all the more tragic. It opened this story with a bang.
I must admit that I am not familiar with your Silverfin stories and the second segment did a good job of introducing the crew.
Looking forward to more of these segments. I think it's a neat way, and ambitious as well, to take on an event like the incursion.