Well, it's an improvement, although that doesn't say much, in this case.
The new one at least gets some fundamentals right. You're not left scratching your head as to why the ship left the battle. You're not just taking wild guesses as to who survived and who didn't.
The ending monologue was pretty good. The "funeral" was good. The Normandy taking flight is a much better way to close the series than the Normandy permanently shipwrecked.
Overall, I'd give the new ending a C+. Up from the original F. Not stellar, but I may be able to stomach playing the series again.