Man, that's some sloppy artwork. I mean, it's unforgivably sloppy. The line between the shoulders and front panel of Geordi's uniform crawls up and down in the first panels, and the expressions are muddy and run from stoic to slack jawed without much in between.
Yeah I agree. It's unfortunate because I like the concept of the story, but I can't really bring myself to read it all with art work the way it is.
I mean, for crying out loud, this looks nothing like the enterprise D. It looks much more like Voyager: http://journeytotheinnerlight.com/ou...ht/page4-4.php
Also I'm pretty sure geordi's stupid expression on that page was just copy and pasted and zoomed in for two panels. if that's not lazy then i don't know what is
i appreciate the effort for the most part though.