Getting better. The markings on the colony ship are a big improvement.
Would it work making the tram/train look more like the front of a TOS era shuttle? You're already going that way with the font on the front.
Maybe make the background similar to the backgrounds we've seen on TOS? Doesn't have to be though.
Maybe add someone beaming in on the platform? That transporter effect is synonymous star trek.
I would change the flags/pennants to make them look more like the UFP pennants we've seen