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Old April 16 2012, 08:50 PM   #146
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Re: Vanguard: Storming Heaven by David Mack Review Thread (Spoilers!)

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In light of a later scene with Pennington and T'Prynn (where Tim goes round and round the station to look for him and she tells him he's gone), that bit of text should perhaps have been moved to the end of that conversation.
No, that would not have worked and please don't "Monday Morning Quarterback" me.
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