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Old April 13 2012, 10:30 AM   #7
Sandoval
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Re: April Challenge Entry - "Out In The Cold"

Ray Gun...

I thought it was a terrific piece of work and I enjoyed it from start to finish. I'd say it's exactly what this whole 'Cimmerian' thing was set up to achieve - telling stories about civilians far outside the safety net of the Federation and the omnipresent security provided by Starfleet.

The writing itself is top notch - I enjoyed the how believable and 'real' the characters felt and how they behaved and interacted, as well as the descriptions of the asteroid mining process.

Well done, I'd imagine that I'll be voting for this in a few week's time.
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