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Old March 31 2012, 03:52 PM   #718
Ayelbourne
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Re: A Song of Ice and Fire/Game of Thrones Spoiler-Filled Discussion

^Yeah.
I mean, cut out about two of those many pointless Dany chapters in midsection and put in the battle at the end in their stead.

That actually would have made reading through that plotknot rewarding.
As it stands, it's just a pointless and boring mess, stealing the reader's time.
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