You need to break up the text, like this:
The male Felarain looked at Alvin and blinked blankly. “Greetings, Dara. How is Starfleet life?”
“Good to know. I am Edimir, Head of Felar Sciences.”
As posted, you have huge solid blocks of text, which makes your story very difficult to read. I'd consider a beta reader also, as you have a fair amount of grammatical issues, mostly punctuation. Your concept is interesting, and will draw a lot more readers with a few easy fixes.