The shot looks odd because it replicates the style of the original shot. The first few years of TNG had an unfortunate habit of doing space shots where the stars move a lot even if the ship doesn't. But everyone seems to be acting like this is new.
I think the shot works fine for the first 3 or 4 seconds, but then the camera just continues
to hang onto it way too long.
It might have helped to at LEAST have some running lights blinking on the ships.