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Old December 30 2011, 09:31 PM   #18
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Re: Dec 2011 Challenge: "Strong Enough Not To Regret"

A nice, interesting tale. I must admit, as someone who hasn't followed your fanfic universe, it was a little difficult to truly comprehend the conflict the main character feels. Still, I got the idea eventually. It's nice to see her father--now a grandfather--learn to look past his prejudice. (In a way, he reminds me of Clint Eastwood's character in Gran Torino.)

Very good!
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